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Name: MildeAmasoj · Date: 04/20/17 12:59 pm · For: Which Goal? The Heart's or the Con's?
This is really good. I know from experience how hard it is to write drabbles, but it's also addicting! I have written, like, a hundred or close XD
Also, I love this pairing to death, so I'm really really glad to read a story about them on here! I'd love it if you could write a longer story about them. Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for the nice review! Don't worry. There's a Neal-Sara story in the making. I don't know if its going to be straight WC or a cover with some other fandom. As for the drabble, yeah I'm definitely going to do more of them. Take care!

Name: Matthew72 · Date: 04/17/17 3:51 am · For: Which Goal? The Heart's or the Con's?
Not bad at all! I sure enjoyed your first attempt at writing a drabble and White Collar fic. And even better is that you reunited Sara and Neal. Love the idea that you had Sara be the reason he ended his con. These two deserved a happy ending in my mind, so this is a lovely image you've given me here. *happy smile*

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review. The drabble's format does pose some interesting challenges. It's kind of like the difference between regular poetry and haiku. While poetry has some rules to it, there is more give and no length limitations to it. Haiku, on the other hand, forces one to portray the image in a certain number of lines and syllables. I'll definitely be doing more like this. As for Neal and Sara, we're definitely in agreement there. I still feel there should have been a scene like this at the end of Au Revoir. (Perhaps Sara meets him in a quaint cafe?) Especially since Peter accepted that Neal was alive and let him go this time, Neal and Sara should have walked off into the sunset together IMHO. Again, I'll definitely be doing more WC/Neal-Sara stuff. Thanks again for reading! Much appreciated! :)

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