Interesting start! Even though it has been YEARS since I've seen Xena, I feel that you really captured the scene well. It brought me right back into that world and how I recall seeing it on the screen.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. On the visualization, that's my rule of thumb. If I can't see it in my mind (and it doesn't look like what it does on the screen), it gets cut from the story. Have a great day!